too much ryan! You've lost structure and composition here - it's all too much - you were really achieving something in those simpler, more truly elegant compositions - I can't read this as a space at all - take a step back - think about the elegance of Beardsley's line and the strength of his shapes. You just need to tweak the composition of these:
too much ryan! You've lost structure and composition here - it's all too much - you were really achieving something in those simpler, more truly elegant compositions - I can't read this as a space at all - take a step back - think about the elegance of Beardsley's line and the strength of his shapes. You just need to tweak the composition of these:
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You want some alternates of this scene to choose from - this latest one has lost the lovely qualities of those previous images.