Hey Ryan - I think both the key assets (the one on the left and the new one towards the centre) could be moved right - nudged a little further across the picture plane; things still feel bunched up against the left side (with a gap on the right) - or you consider a third 'key asset' to occupy that 'gap'? There are still issues of visual balance to be explored I think. In terms of colour, I like the monochromatic ones - but I would like to see a classic Beardsley b/w version.
Hey Ryan - I think both the key assets (the one on the left and the new one towards the centre) could be moved right - nudged a little further across the picture plane; things still feel bunched up against the left side (with a gap on the right) - or you consider a third 'key asset' to occupy that 'gap'? There are still issues of visual balance to be explored I think. In terms of colour, I like the monochromatic ones - but I would like to see a classic Beardsley b/w version.
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