Ryan - trust me on this - look again - you're not thinking compositionally; look at the top image here: http://raiansan.blogspot.co.uk/2014/11/what-if-metropolis-concept-art-three.html
See how you get a real sense of the space in that top image? My suggestion was simply that you shift the foreground elements just a little more to the right to create more balance - you pretty much have it in this image, Ryan - just shift the existing elements to the right by a few nudges...! In these recent images you seem to be making everything very dark, with no visual hierarchy - go back!
Ryan - trust me on this - look again - you're not thinking compositionally; look at the top image here:
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See how you get a real sense of the space in that top image? My suggestion was simply that you shift the foreground elements just a little more to the right to create more balance - you pretty much have it in this image, Ryan - just shift the existing elements to the right by a few nudges...! In these recent images you seem to be making everything very dark, with no visual hierarchy - go back!