Let me know when you want to discuss a few things here - i.e. I don't want to tell you things of which you're already aware - for example, the odd 'glitchy' camera movement at around 34 secs, where the camera appears to move through an object, creating an on-screen flicker? Also, I'd try and avoid using cross-dissolves to transition from shot-to-shot, except within the design montage scene - cross dissolves often feel indecisive when they're being used to blend edits together.
Let me know when you want to discuss a few things here - i.e. I don't want to tell you things of which you're already aware - for example, the odd 'glitchy' camera movement at around 34 secs, where the camera appears to move through an object, creating an on-screen flicker? Also, I'd try and avoid using cross-dissolves to transition from shot-to-shot, except within the design montage scene - cross dissolves often feel indecisive when they're being used to blend edits together.
ReplyDeletei'm ready to discuss any issues, i left a couple in there as i need them for rough timing. don't hesitate to mention any issues you notice! :D
DeleteOh - and the windmill world is very pretty :)
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